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我信 (旧作)

nobody
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Posted: 2007-01-02 10:53:23 Post subject: 我信 (旧作)

假如我有过一段痛彻心脾的旧恋那在这美奂之夜── 静悄静悄的，正适合回味石磨兰的天空飘逸有如迎风的长鬃月亮咩咩叫着咀嚼树梢上的嫩叶我被欲望嚣扰又被平静折磨风倦了，斜斜地吊挂在树上── 我希望有人看到我沉思可有慈悲，向着沉哀？可有手，向着魂魄? 空的感觉远不是寂寞能概括石磨兰的天空…… 月亮咩咩叫着…… 随便捉住一个念头想下去，就很可怕，就无法忍受…… 黑暗中，仿佛有声音在询问── 用一种缓慢的，低沉的喉音我急忙仰起头，铮铮答曰: 我信, 我信

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Posted: 2007-01-02 11:10:05 Post subject:

月亮咩咩叫着咀嚼树梢上的嫩叶 very strong feelings welcome simplysimple I am from Victoria _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

nobody
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Posted: 2007-01-02 11:41:51 Post subject:

thanks a lot _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-01-02 12:26:08 Post subject:

simplysimple wrote:

thanks a lot

give you a welcome page:

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?p=6249#6249

Very Happy

nobody
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Posted: 2007-01-02 12:49:50 Post subject:

thanks, cheers _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-01-02 17:23:54 Post subject:

清丽。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-01-02 20:04:59 Post subject:

思绪如丝斜杨柳, 寂静冷月欲有声如诗入画

和平岛
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Posted: 2007-01-02 20:09:21 Post subject:

愈读愈喜欢的感觉 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

nobody
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Posted: 2007-01-03 00:20:41 Post subject:

appreciate comments from three of you, thanks alot _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

司马策风
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Posted: 2007-01-03 21:33:42 Post subject:

优美深情的抒情司马问好新年好 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

和平岛
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Posted: 2007-01-03 21:35:31 Post subject:

司马策风 wrote:

优美深情的抒情

司马问好

新年好

你们两个都是温哥华的
诗歌写得很棒, 可以好好交流
Very Happy

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nobody
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Posted: 2007-01-04 06:31:48 Post subject:

not 棒, all 旧作. 封笔 > 10 years, haha. thanks for 和马 's visits and comments. Happy new year too!

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Posted: 2007-01-04 18:25:16 Post subject:

simplysimple wrote:

not 棒, all 旧作. 封笔 > 10 years, haha. thanks for 和马 's visits and comments. Happy new year too!

十年前就写得这么好
佩服一下
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nobody
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Posted: 2007-01-04 19:06:48 Post subject:

thanks 岛. haha, to me, your compliment is something like "十年前就这么年青" _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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