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在秋天行走
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PostPosted: 2008-11-09 16:06:27    Post subject: 在秋天行走 Reply with quote

《行走在秋天》
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秋天爬上藤萝纤细的手指
远香为日子晒红
我的步调很轻
沉重的鞋已被遗忘

脚踝被童子攥住
神经拉长和声
我刚刚写下一个福字
一头飞入天边的湖泊

我也回到儿时
伏在风扬的案桌
解析率真的方程式
把成熟交给季节

2008年11月3日星期一
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金金
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Joined: 08 Feb 2007
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PostPosted: 2008-11-09 23:26:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

好玩儿的意象!:这第二段啥想法来的”),真好玩


问好你!!冬天快乐:)!
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飞翔的夏天
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PostPosted: 2008-11-10 01:17:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

情趣十足
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白水
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PostPosted: 2008-11-10 17:33:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

开阔的思绪
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PostPosted: 2008-11-12 15:51:28    Post subject: 谢谢 Reply with quote

[quote="金金"]好玩儿的意象!:这第二段啥想法来的”),真好玩
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谢谢朋友,我小时是风筝迷,见到秋天放风筝的孩子,自然萌生借用,表达童心,愉快的感触。问好。
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