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老岳母的早晨
金川诗歌
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PostPosted: 2008-11-12 02:50:54    Post subject: 老岳母的早晨 Reply with quote

老岳母的早晨

文 / 山西 金川诗歌

那被白昼烤软的石头
在夜晚过去又苏醒
一张面孔
被岁月的羽毛与鸟屎造访
有着让人厌倦也难以抛弃的
灿烂的斑痕。这个老人
一双浑浊的眼
闪烁着锐利的用心
总是不离你的左左右右
古朴的光环。歹毒的气息
无缘无故熄灭你的自由
之后,裸露出一贯的无知
一贯的善意做辩解
那哀怜的神色
掩盖着她心中的怒火

二〇〇八年五月二十九日
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2008-11-12 04:03:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

语意似乎未明,前两句作者似不忍挪移,几个断行处有些生硬。
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PostPosted: 2008-11-13 06:06:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

不乖,又惹岳母生气了
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PostPosted: 2008-11-14 07:32:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

真不乖。
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PostPosted: 2008-11-21 16:24:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读
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