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静夜赠少君兄

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Posted: 2008-09-22 15:41:30 Post subject: 静夜赠少君兄

静夜遁入无人的夜空旷的路阔向最深的独与蛙声友伴蟋蟀响在路边的草丛中你曾为此多次驻足这片水域，与月光结识。此刻水边建设中的高楼，也不发出声音一束影柱擎着夜，探射出光亮。哦，我要作别静夜。焦躁的脚步踏着空旷的路阔向最深的独投进一片黑暗在路灯的尽头而无反顾而返这无人的夜。多少年啦？又是多久，一切也已无人忆起。二〇〇八年九月二十日星期六 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2008-09-23 04:40:22 Post subject:

敢问哪个少君湖北韩少君吗 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2008-09-23 14:10:43 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

敢问哪个少君湖北韩少君吗

四平少君是也。
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乱弹者是我
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Posted: 2008-10-05 01:43:29 Post subject:

摆着老祖宗的七律不用却偏偏去弄鸟什子的洋人的十四行，弄的却是不伦不类

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Posted: 2008-10-05 01:57:45 Post subject:

呵呵，有来个乱弹的？问好新朋友！

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Posted: 2008-10-05 17:24:31 Post subject:

乱弹者是我 wrote:

摆着老祖宗的七律不用却偏偏去弄鸟什子的洋人的十四行，弄的却是不伦不类

老祖宗就留给你吧，看着让我憎厌。哈哈，你也弹一首让我见识见识。我把十四行去掉，免得起不必要的争端，让诗沾上俗气。
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乱弹者是我
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Posted: 2008-11-07 07:30:16 Post subject:

去掉十四行,见长进;数典忘祖终究还是不应该的. 四平少君是也。_________________ 而浮生若梦，为欢几何？老祖宗惯用的死语言也!!!!!!

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Posted: 2008-11-09 01:38:39 Post subject:

乱弹者是我 wrote:

去掉十四行,见长进;数典忘祖终究还是不应该的.
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我现在也没有心情。去掉“十四行”，完全不是因为你的嘴。
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Posted: 2008-11-09 01:40:10 Post subject:

少君算是我的朋友。人家没意见，你别瞎搅和，钻牛角尖。你知道什么是朋友情谊吗？ “数典忘祖”，你没资格说这个词！ _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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