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红叶情
雨中垂钓人
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Joined: 18 Jun 2007
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PostPosted: 2008-11-06 15:57:28    Post subject: 红叶情 Reply with quote

我是香山的红叶,在秋风中摇动我殷红的感情。谁都明白,每天饱受风的摇曳,我不被采摘也会在寒霜中坠落。情感的矛盾,如同流水一般,似是奔流向前,其实是多少的无奈。春天谁都喜爱,那是思想的澎湃。春天里更有许多的空白,只是人们从枝头看见了绿色的嫩芽,绿草中几朵花开。我比别的叶子先红,可是绿色无意却把我掩盖。我是否站的枝头太高,超出了寻找者的眼界之外?望天,空洞。太大,也高不可测。看下,烦闷。层层叠叠,枝枝杈杈,时不时有股股的腐霉之气。小鸟在枝头嬉戏,抖动的翅膀拂过我的胸口。如果是一片带翅膀的叶子,我会怎样的飞翔。……
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荷梦
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Joined: 19 Dec 2006
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PostPosted: 2008-11-07 00:49:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好雨中垂钓人!荷梦个人感觉从文学的角度来说,本文还需要进一步地深化,细化——个人愚见,望见谅!欢迎常来交流!
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