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《临行前的夜晚》
李宏
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PostPosted: 2008-11-03 19:28:49    Post subject: 《临行前的夜晚》 Reply with quote

临行前的夜晚



文/李宏



那两颗树

并排站着

那道风

恰好穿过两颗树之间的

缝隙





举起我的衣襟

月黑风高

是侠盗的好时光



我在向你招手

如远去的浮云

孤寂

你在向我招手

是送别

还是再次相遇



2008.9.19
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2008-11-04 03:23:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

可以精炼些。
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-11-04 03:55:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗意有待出新.
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