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原创《我确定》
远山云树
童生


Joined: 27 May 2006
Posts: 53
Location: 中国四川 
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PostPosted: 2006-06-03 17:04:02    Post subject: 原创《我确定》 Reply with quote

当这肌肤
如此细腻地粘紧

我确定

你的微风
正融尽我最后的冰凌
你的溪流
正渗透我干渴的土层
而你的生命
已暗接我不安的命运

我们 
源自女娲抟土                             
甚或更早的 天地初分
流经亿万斯年
阴晴日月 分分合合
此生再次相汇成河
渐渐宽阔 无限宽阔

水面平静 
而深沉的水底 一路奔腾
在剧烈融合的冲动里 翻翻滚滚 
而后轻盈地上升
--如此宁静......

我们
已不是传说的我们
我确定

但我再警告你一次
别那么用力
咬我的嘴唇
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尹士林
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Joined: 26 May 2006
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Location: 河北保定易县中学
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PostPosted: 2006-06-03 18:29:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

我们 
源自女娲抟土                             
甚或更早的 天地初分
流经亿万斯年
阴晴日月 分分合合
此生再次相汇成河
渐渐宽阔 无限宽阔

水面平静 
而深沉的水底 一路奔腾
在剧烈融合的冲动里 翻翻滚滚 
而后轻盈地上升
--如此宁静......

不错
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河北易县中学 尹士林
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远山云树
童生


Joined: 27 May 2006
Posts: 53
Location: 中国四川 
远山云树Collection
PostPosted: 2006-06-04 19:20:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢尹兄关注
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