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[原创]醉红叶（外一首）

庄之谐
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Posted: 2008-10-29 04:12:21 Post subject: [原创]醉红叶（外一首）

背对窗户的女人绣花针刺破了猫的身体潜心刺绣的女人被猫的叫喊声扔进了红尘猫爪挠啊挠红了一院的叶子猫的嘴唇苍白对远方亲人说声亲爱的女人的嘴唇红润满树的叶子亲吻过一样红润一壶秋酿了又酿女人起身站到窗台前和着红叶醉醺醺的耳语院外传来归家的脚步声《桃叶渡》桃叶是春天的眉毛斜斜地飘进秋的口袋里那眉开眼笑的一线溪和身后的夏打完招呼回首便心有戚戚一只桃走了一树桃都走了春天明年恰巧还来为何不留一个岗哨有人活在溪水两岸日子尽显绿肥红瘦凭着对桃的刻骨相思漂浮水面的桃叶走也不是留也不是 _________________ E-mail:xruup@163.com

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2008-10-29 22:07:42 Post subject:

语言活泼，诗意灵动。第一首情节、悬念，第二首想象好。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

曲元奇
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Posted: 2008-10-30 20:12:57 Post subject:

【被猫的呌喊声扔进红尘】

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