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和平岛的初女作: 我是一朵云

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和平岛
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Posted: 2006-12-12 20:17:14 Post subject: 和平岛的初女作: 我是一朵云

我是一朵云我是一朵云一朵潇洒飘逸的云; 多么想让你看到我的思念; 在你还在睡梦中时我已驻足你的床前幻成满天朝霞飞红映出你的脸庞来把你仔细端详悄悄地把你从梦中吻醒我是一朵云一朵浪漫痴情的云; 真的想在黑暗还没使我失色前让你看到我的洁白; 在我还没因爱你而泣呼惊动狂风把我吹散; 在我还没因爱你而落泪化作漫天暴雨把你华衣打湿我是一朵云一朵体贴多姿的云; 真渴望让你看到我的温柔; 在烈日正炎时飘到你的上空给你遮挡酷暑给你带来微风凉爽变化出千姿百态让你赏心悦目我是一朵云一朵如火如荼的云; 多希望让你能看见我的光彩在落日西沉时为了让你看我最后的一眼我把自己焚烧变成热烈奔放的彩霞染红了天边的群山给大海镀上了金色 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

心晨
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Posted: 2006-12-12 20:24:54 Post subject:

好一朵温柔美丽的云，欣赏～

和平岛
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Posted: 2006-12-12 20:42:26 Post subject:

心晨 wrote:

好一朵温柔美丽的云，欣赏～

谢谢心晨!

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花漫天
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Posted: 2006-12-12 20:53:07 Post subject:

我来看你的温柔

心晨
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Posted: 2006-12-12 20:57:05 Post subject:

和平岛 wrote:

心晨 wrote:

好一朵温柔美丽的云，欣赏～

谢谢心晨!

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大诗人，见外了不是，呵呵～ Razz

一壶月光
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Posted: 2006-12-13 04:44:08 Post subject:

在这岛上,偶一点也不熟悉地形哟,先欣花观云哈.

花漫天
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Posted: 2006-12-13 20:08:03 Post subject:

光光－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－你来啦－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－ _________________ 我要烦你一辈子，因为我爱你

和平岛在哪里?
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Posted: 2006-12-17 04:00:57 Post subject: Re: 和平岛的初女作: 我是一朵云

我是一朵云一朵体贴多姿的云; 真渴望让你看到我的温柔; 在烈日正炎时飘到你的上空给你遮挡酷暑给你带来微风凉爽变化出千姿百态让你赏心悦目真的???

和平岛
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Posted: 2006-12-17 09:01:58 Post subject:

云的意象很丰富呀 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

nobody
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Posted: 2007-01-09 19:51:30 Post subject:

各位真酸呀！大班时俺也写过俺是一朵云不过俺是一朵小小的乌云。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

花漫天
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Posted: 2007-01-09 22:28:39 Post subject:

我是一只乌鸦　　哈哈 _________________ 我要烦你一辈子，因为我爱你

nobody
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Posted: 2007-01-09 23:20:59 Post subject:

花漫天 wrote:

我是一只乌鸦　　哈哈

woops, 本乌云因严重近视，摆了一个乌龙，错认贵乌鸦为乌贼。sorry.

奇怪，这乌鸦怎莫哈哈地叫，不是瓜瓜的呢？莫非。。。因为爱？ Embarassed

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北美的月亮
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Posted: 2007-01-10 22:30:30 Post subject:

一朵如火如荼的云，终于让我看见你的光彩，焚烧着自己的心血，变成热烈奔放的彩霞，染红了北美枫的天空。 _________________ 你是我的太阳，给了我阳光——却让我看不到你。于是岁月只能让我在你如火的目光里———站成一棵月亮树。

和平岛
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Posted: 2007-02-20 07:17:12 Post subject:

_________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

李智强
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Posted: 2007-02-24 04:21:19 Post subject:

谁是一朵云。在哪里飘荡着？ _________________ 【狂到世人皆欲杀】【醉来天子不能传】

nobody
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Posted: 2007-03-21 18:52:09 Post subject:

哇，岛主够恋人，也够自恋的估计，也招人恋。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

冷巉
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Posted: 2007-04-03 09:30:51 Post subject:

偶是一朵云，从岛上漂过~~~~~~~~~~``````` _________________ syr@shiyanren.com 冷巉湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000

真的
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Posted: 2007-04-17 11:34:50 Post subject: Re: 和平岛的初女作: 我是一朵云

和平岛在哪里? wrote:

我是一朵云
一朵体贴多姿的云;
真渴望
让你看到我的温柔;
在烈日正炎时
飘到你的上空
给你遮挡酷暑
给你带来微风凉爽
变化出千姿百态
让你赏心悦目

真的???

真的在下面！

心晨
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Posted: 2007-04-18 05:26:04 Post subject:

我是一朵云，飘向向往的地方

真的
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Posted: 2007-04-22 10:31:12 Post subject:

李智强 wrote:

谁是一朵云。在哪里飘荡着？

据回帖中，有乌云、乌鸦、乌贼。天上地上水中都有，不太好找

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