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秋之小柳

乡间晚风
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Joined: 15 Oct 2008
Posts: 8

乡间晚风Collection

Posted: 2008-10-20 19:06:18 Post subject: 秋之小柳

秋之小柳如清倩纯丽的小女孩撑一把伞伞面，她要湛蓝湛蓝？湛蓝也是不够的还要可爱跳跃的图案梨黄吧，梨黄有果子的甜润还要那么一点舍不掉的夏绿的清亮咦，这样的繁复哪还有我要的湛蓝？呵，秋风大叔是最解意的哟他带来了一支旋舞分飞黄的翎绿的羽留三分疏星般的小舟与清朗的湛蓝七分呢？盈落了灿为毯

上城
进士出身

Joined: 15 Mar 2007
Posts: 2024
Location: 江夏黄鹤楼
上城Collection

Posted: 2008-10-20 19:43:30 Post subject:

哇，写得好。三分疏星般的小舟与清朗的湛蓝，七分灿落的毯。精妙。应是晴空里的秋日。 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

nobody
进士出身

Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
nobodyCollection

Posted: 2008-10-20 19:44:37 Post subject:

哇，真够酸的，秋之小柳, 哈哈。得五四真传！ _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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