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咏春诗句杂谈
三弦儿
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PostPosted: 2008-10-12 07:48:56    Post subject: 咏春诗句杂谈 Reply with quote

咏春诗句杂谈

李山甫在他的《寒食》诗里有两句是:有时三点两点雨 到处十枝五枝花 春天多是细风小雨,所以才有晏殊的 恼人天气又春阴。诗人在这里运用三点两点来形容春雨的细碎,若有若无;春雨润开了花儿,十枝五枝的花,开的珍贵。正是这三三两点的雨,才有了十枝五枝的花;如果用有时十点百点雨,到处千枝万枝花,那样这诗句就太俗气了。
竹外桃花两三枝 春江水暖鸭先知
这是苏轼的诗句。每当读到这句诗的时候,我都很迷惑。春江水暖为什么不是鹅先知?为什么不是鱼先知?可偏偏是鸭呢?多年后,仔细的想想豁然开朗。鹅大不分时间都在地上觅食,歪歪倒倒的很少下水;鱼,无时无刻不在水里,水温的慢慢变化,它已不易察觉;只有那鸭子,生性喜水,整日介嘎嘎嘎嘎地在水里游戏捉鱼虾,晚上回到窝里,第二天又去下水,只有它最容易也最先知道水温的变化;可见诗人观察的有多么的仔细。
天街小雨润如酥,草色遥看近却无。
春雨贵如油,天上下着小雨,滋润着万物,恰是好时好节好去处。那刚破土的草儿,远远的望去一片绿色,可近看好象又没有了,最喜的就是这句草色遥看近却无,诗人捕捉住人们对美好事物的渴望和希冀,可美好的事物,却往往在那时有时无时隐时现之中。
城上风光莺乱语,城下烟波春拍岸。!
这是钱惟演的《花木兰》,春天来了,到处是姹紫千红,百鸟啼鸣,尤其是那黄莺儿乱了性子,飞来飞去的啼个没完,郊外,春水如带烟波一片,诗人练字练到让人拍案叫绝。他不用水字,而是用了一个春字,这个春字用得是何等的绝妙,把个春色倾泄的是奔流千里,让人心动神怡。
春天是诗的季节,让我这枝笨拙的笔,也来写首咏春的诗,以此来赞美这美丽而令人心动的春天!

七律 春画

东风细雨润春欢
偷取馨香护翠兰
野草青青闹垄上
柳枝嫩嫩戏栏杆

黄莺唤醒前山梦
雾霭轻笼后水滩
最是微醺尝绿酒
焚香研磨点青丹


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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2008-10-12 14:25:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

在这变质的秋天里,读君评春写春的诗文,仿佛又回春心飞舞的时光。
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一身灰
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PostPosted: 2008-10-12 15:12:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

难得心头春景,尽是柳绿桃红。
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PostPosted: 2008-10-28 01:35:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

古人咏春,的确绝了!
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