是有缘
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 Posted: 2008-09-28 19:52:08 Post subject: 秋 （七绝三首） |
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平林漠漠意通秋，
树影风摇助水流。
四海团圆齐望月，
清光片片寄离愁。
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痴情月照在中秋，
思绪如飞不禁流。
夜色分明湖似镜，
银光又落补闲愁。
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无边美景又逢秋，
浅映山前赤水流。
欲写层林浓淡色，
烟霞如故染霜愁。 |
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暗香如沁
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2008-09-29 06:54:41 Post subject: |
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有缘兄缘愁写秋,以"寄离愁""补闲愁""染霜愁"出之,
愁而不哀,亦潇洒之属也!
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wenshan
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| Posted: 2008-10-03 06:50:34 Post subject: |
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步是有缘《七绝秋》原玉。请指正。
枫邦丹树丽三秋，
天瀑马蹄飞激流。（注）
是有缘来欣把酒，
联吟剪烛莫言愁。
（注）尼加拉马蹄大瀑布。
(加拿大/闻山)
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冰清
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| Posted: 2008-10-09 09:56:16 Post subject: |
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| 一襟离愁多少泪, 几年流得到中州? |
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2008-10-09 20:45:03 Post subject: |
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谢谢夸奖，诚不敢当。问好！ |
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2008-10-09 20:46:57 Post subject: |
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| 黄洋界 wrote: |
有缘兄缘愁写秋,以"寄离愁""补闲愁""染霜愁"出之,
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谢谢黄老师点评。 |
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2008-10-09 20:49:50 Post subject: |
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| wenshan wrote: |
步是有缘《七绝秋》原玉。请指正。
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谢谢闻山兄雅和安慰。 |
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2008-10-09 20:50:43 Post subject: |
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| 冰清 wrote: |
| 一襟离愁多少泪, 几年流得到中州? |
是啊，写不尽的离愁。 |
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