菩提子
童生
Joined: 06 Sep 2007
Posts: 32
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 Posted: 2008-10-06 11:08:26 Post subject: 秋游---巫山一段云 |
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. . .秋游. . .
[巫山一段云]
盘曲疑无路,
腾云上碧穹.
泉轻吻石响叮咚,
霜重染丹枫.
两岫捧明镜,
孤桥抛落虹.
飘然脱俗似顽童,
随鸟任西东.
( 盘曲山径,幽深疑无路,浮云缥缈,攀登其中,尤如腾云直上碧空.泉水抚吻着岸边青石,轻轻地流淌,奏出叮咚欢快乐章.秋霜染红了丹枫.一泓碧绿湖水,似在两岫中捧着一方明镜,一条拱桥若落虹.身处尤感,飘然脱俗,心性似顽童,追逐着婉啭啼鸟,一任西东! ) |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2008-10-06 16:27:15 Post subject: |
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菩提秋游,有声有色.
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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菩提子
童生
Joined: 06 Sep 2007
Posts: 32
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| Posted: 2008-10-07 15:19:51 Post subject: |
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| 谢黄兄鼓励! |
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野航
秀才
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 547
Location: toronto
野航Collection |
| Posted: 2008-10-07 16:16:09 Post subject: |
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写景如画
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回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统 |
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菩提子
童生
Joined: 06 Sep 2007
Posts: 32
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| Posted: 2008-10-08 05:52:23 Post subject: |
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| 请野航君多指导! |
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暗香如沁
秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007
Posts: 885
Location: 北京
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菩提子
童生
Joined: 06 Sep 2007
Posts: 32
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| Posted: 2008-10-09 12:44:01 Post subject: |
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| 谢暗香如沁鼓励! |
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
| Posted: 2008-10-09 13:19:48 Post subject: |
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炼字造境都好!
"泉轻吻石响叮咚". 我听到了"吻"的声音. |
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