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战(外两首)
风的声音
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PostPosted: 2008-09-24 02:47:16    Post subject: 战(外两首) Reply with quote

《战》

北上朔方,渡洛水
过鸿门,抵边塞
站在飞将军当年射石的地方
我,回到了古代

旌旗连营,马儿低嘶
头顶是厚厚的云霾
荒原陷入了沉闷

胡人的弯刀就在百里外
森冷的光芒,像月
夜很静,能听到沙砾的滚动声

我不再想你,身披铠甲立于帐外
北风卷起我的头发,向南飘扬
束成一支支利箭

望着眼前肃立的士兵
那一张张年轻而坚毅的脸
仿佛是在说“死神,请你来吧!”

血往上涌,泪悬眼眶
我猛得抽出佩剑,指向天
“儿郎们,备战!!!”
“备战......”

《唯我独尊》

匈奴,鲜卑,突阙
万里草原,千里雪域
大漠的狂沙扑打着岁月
历史,在不变的风景里
显得脆弱

请允许我,骑一匹骏马回归
不做将军,不做枭雄
就做一个真性情的书生
打抱不平,敢爱敢恨
为了心爱的人,可以绝尘万里

前途多艰,而拂过脑海的
是你的笑脸
风大雨大,响在耳畔的
是你的声音
我的心里燃起了熊熊热火

来吧,雪山沼泽
来吧,刀枪剑戟
凶恶的胡虏,请用利箭贯穿我的胸膛
即使我死去
我的信念,也会如一

《志在,风在》

什么是梦,什么是黑夜
黄浦江的风凛冽凄冷
提一把刀,巍峨于岁月
淡看风云

互看一眼,你悠然问我:
“怕吗,兄弟”
我微笑着张张嘴,却吸进一口风
手紧紧和你握在一起

苍茫的夜啊,请见证这一刻
凛冽的风啊,请席卷我们的身躯
乌云向你我渐渐侵袭
我们狂笑,以对天地

“杀,杀,杀!!!”
刀光剑影里,温烫的鲜血里
生命之花最后一次绽放
并在大地上,打下亘古的印记

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PostPosted: 2008-09-25 21:46:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有现场感,语言功夫也很好。问好。
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2008-09-26 02:07:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

请允许我,骑一匹骏马回归
不做将军,不做枭雄
就做一个真性情的书生
——真性情!
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爱月
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Joined: 12 Jun 2008
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PostPosted: 2008-09-26 02:19:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

刚看了两个帖子,都写的血腥也深刻。这个现场感很强烈!
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