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残荷秋梦

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Posted: 2008-09-18 08:30:34 Post subject: 残荷秋梦

荷塘的夜还未醒透梦，尚不肯离去半醒的知觉朦胧而细腻听雨，回味每一个夏天的细节忘记了是怎样的开始是否有风有云有看不透的烟雨荷花痴情的玉立只为等一个夏的故事和一个秋的结局岸边的身影已随风隐去天，说凉就凉了睁开眼，就是真实的天亮清冷的依旧清冷错过的还是错过 09/18/2008[/img]

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Posted: 2008-09-18 08:55:56 Post subject:

真厉害！说不韵就不韵。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-09-18 09:08:00 Post subject: 不晕就不晕吗，又有啥意见

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真厉害！说不韵就不韵。

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Posted: 2008-09-18 09:22:41 Post subject:

转韵练习一树晚秋，零乱了枝头旧年的红叶，依然在枕边消瘦光阴被浓缩，步履在纸边跋涉斑痕瓖嵌的愁，沉默在暗铜色后错过的还是错过清冷的依旧清冷忘记了是怎样的开始是否有风有云，有个夏天的故事有看不透的烟雨和一个秋的结局清澈中，留下深长的景致 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-09-18 09:25:16 Post subject: 转的还可以吧？现在这里右键功能全锁死！真难偷～

多花好多时间！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-09-18 11:03:22 Post subject: 天，收容所加杂货店

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转韵练习
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Posted: 2008-09-18 14:36:48 Post subject: 癞痢头也是个娃，自己的孩子自己带。

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诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

转韵练习
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可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-09-18 21:15:54 Post subject:

清冷的依旧清冷错过的已经错过 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-09-18 21:27:12 Post subject:

很早的早晨，去荷塘，会怎么样？ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-09-19 07:47:44 Post subject: 会掉坑里！很晚的晚上去也一样。

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很早的早晨，去荷塘，会怎么样？

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Posted: 2008-09-21 17:10:30 Post subject:

红袖添乱 wrote:

很早的早晨，去荷塘，会怎么样？

会很冷～会看到梦游～，因为"荷塘的夜还未醒透" Rolling Eyes

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Posted: 2008-09-21 17:16:34 Post subject:

却道天凉好个秋～ _________________ 瞠目结舌

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Posted: 2008-09-22 14:42:43 Post subject: 会感冒

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很早的早晨，去荷塘，会怎么样？

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