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哥哥（被朋友引来，拜会各位）

绝世孤独
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Posted: 2006-12-17 23:02:13 Post subject: 哥哥（被朋友引来，拜会各位）

枉矢刺不穿你那道墙。我知道于玄窗前一直守望炉火将影子映出幢幢光晕哥哥，今夜想必你不会归来哥哥，你的归期在第几个夏夜？今夏多么漫长次次落幕，我都想看看你那张躲在幕后的脸是不是像冬天的蝉翼一样不飞翔，因此不感伤即使光阴一寸寸刺入心脏都妆扮好了，哥哥还是这不愠不燥的天我梅花般的脸颊只能静静的不敢怒绽所有分离都显得太长久了坏天气是不是就是你离开的原因 _________________ 一步步前行，不停回望渍入脚印里的泪滴。。。。。

和平岛
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Posted: 2006-12-17 23:42:16 Post subject:

是不是像冬天的蝉翼一样．．．我梅花般的脸颊只能静静的情绪饱满语言优美，感人肺腑坏天气是不是就是你离开的原因很有人情味欢迎绝世孤独有朋友交流，应该不再孤独了 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

司马策风
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Posted: 2006-12-18 00:15:24 Post subject:

欢迎新诗友。握手 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

静冰
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Posted: 2006-12-18 00:33:34 Post subject: Re: 哥哥（被朋友引来，拜会各位）

绝世孤独 wrote:

枉矢刺不穿你那道墙。我知道
于玄窗前一直守望
炉火将影子映出幢幢光晕
哥哥，今夜想必你不会归来
哥哥，你的归期在第几个夏夜？

今夏多么漫长
次次落幕，我都想看看你那张
躲在幕后的脸
是不是像冬天的蝉翼一样
不飞翔，因此不感伤
即使光阴一寸寸刺入心脏

都妆扮好了，哥哥
还是这不愠不燥的天
我梅花般的脸颊只能静静的
不敢怒绽

所有分离都显得太长久了
坏天气是不是就是你离开的原因

欢迎宝贝来哟,
抱抱. Smile

kokho
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Joined: 30 Nov 2006
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Posted: 2006-12-18 01:41:50 Post subject:

深情的声音　欢迎新朋友。。。给你发了个欢迎贴　；）） http://oson.ca/bbs/bmf/viewtopic.php?p=5648#5648 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

半溪明月
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Posted: 2006-12-18 03:08:42 Post subject:

写得深情,感动!问好新朋友~

白水
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Posted: 2006-12-18 19:14:09 Post subject:

真情感人

绝世孤独
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Joined: 17 Dec 2006
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Posted: 2006-12-18 19:23:06 Post subject:

呵呵，谢谢楼上诸位的热情，希望在这里认识多些朋友。 _________________ 一步步前行，不停回望渍入脚印里的泪滴。。。。。

杯中冲浪
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
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Posted: 2006-12-19 04:32:12 Post subject:

情真意切 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

维鹿延
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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Location: 中国广东
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Posted: 2006-12-20 08:12:41 Post subject:

欢迎新诗友。 _________________ 散步者身体里面的声音

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