悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-09 05:25:16 Post subject: 写诗 |
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一个个符号,一些堆挤在一起
排列组合的记忆,和山月不知的心里事
呼吸在字的细缝间游走
写一首诗和一个心声
影子印在你看不见的那面
言语不相干得如横空的疏枝
空落的雪花,冰冷的童话
文字的自由逃不脱
一张白纸,和纸边站着的忧伤
涉时光河,语驿边桥,追一片淡去的云
久远的疲惫浓缩在诗行间
季节无声盈满
09/09/2008(写诗,胡言乱语) |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-09 11:27:41 Post subject: |
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组合的不够好,不反对阅读时的停顿,但要有些东西。 _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-09 11:56:55 Post subject: 不要东西,要南北 |
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詩盜喜裸評 wrote: |
组合的不够好,不反对阅读时的停顿,但要有些东西。 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-09 12:52:25 Post subject: 东西来了...... |
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小二, 二两白干,一盘花生米,外加一碗牛肉面 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-09 13:55:36 Post subject: 早餐哪!这样吃活不过三十,真饿了~ |
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悠子 wrote: |
小二, 二兩白干,一盤花生米,外加一碗牛肉麵 |
_________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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红袖添乱 秀才

Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
红袖添乱Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-10 06:54:22 Post subject: |
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再要一只大闸蟹
桂花新酿
大饼油条
豆浆
醉虾
袈裟肉
夫妻肺片
黑椒牛柳
薰鸭肝
热烤鹅肝
吃完再点。 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-10 07:02:55 Post subject: 希望你有吃不胖的体质。 |
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_________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-10 08:15:23 Post subject: 你是东西南北的乱吃 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
是有缘Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-12 06:08:17 Post subject: |
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捡好吃的点。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情 |
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拈花微笑 秀才
Joined: 21 Jan 2008 Posts: 311
拈花微笑Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-12 06:41:11 Post subject: |
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俺吃,俺大吃~~ _________________ 瞠目结舌 |
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