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写诗
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PostPosted: 2008-09-09 05:25:16    Post subject: 写诗 Reply with quote

一个个符号,一些堆挤在一起
排列组合的记忆,和山月不知的心里事
呼吸在字的细缝间游走

写一首诗和一个心声
影子印在你看不见的那面
言语不相干得如横空的疏枝

空落的雪花,冰冷的童话
文字的自由逃不脱
一张白纸,和纸边站着的忧伤

涉时光河,语驿边桥,追一片淡去的云
久远的疲惫浓缩在诗行间
季节无声盈满

09/09/2008(写诗,胡言乱语)
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PostPosted: 2008-09-09 11:27:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

组合的不够好,不反对阅读时的停顿,但要有些东西。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-09 11:56:55    Post subject: 不要东西,要南北 Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
组合的不够好,不反对阅读时的停顿,但要有些东西。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-09 12:52:25    Post subject: 东西来了...... Reply with quote

小二, 二两白干,一盘花生米,外加一碗牛肉面
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PostPosted: 2008-09-09 13:55:36    Post subject: 早餐哪!这样吃活不过三十,真饿了~ Reply with quote

悠子 wrote:
小二, 二兩白干,一盤花生米,外加一碗牛肉麵

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PostPosted: 2008-09-10 06:54:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

再要一只大闸蟹
桂花新酿
大饼油条
豆浆
醉虾
袈裟肉
夫妻肺片
黑椒牛柳
薰鸭肝
热烤鹅肝

吃完再点。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-10 07:02:55    Post subject: 希望你有吃不胖的体质。 Reply with quote

紅袖添亂 wrote:
再要一隻大閘蟹
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PostPosted: 2008-09-10 08:15:23    Post subject: 你是东西南北的乱吃 Reply with quote

红袖添乱 wrote:
再要一只大闸蟹
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PostPosted: 2008-09-12 06:08:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

捡好吃的点。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-12 06:41:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

俺吃,俺大吃~~
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