爱爱
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 Posted: 2008-09-08 09:15:03 Post subject: 相思贵姓---和（诗盗，墨瑞, 茉儿） 给诗盗交作业~~ |
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相思贵姓 by 爱爱
惟恐心跳
惊醒初秋垄上宁静的月光
惟恐笙萧
吹落隐藏眉间殷红的珠沙
星星很遥远
抬头凝望,只是一束
缥缈的光
山水隔开了距离, 只留一段情殇
几个字, 些许盼望, 无尽思量
不要轻易诠释前世的篇章, 夜夜呼唤的名字
是否还一如既往?
GD也许仅仅是一种奢侈, GD
偏偏就放肆飞扬起来, 成灰的
一排排心字
关上门, 慢火煨一锅香浓的汤
一口一口滚烫了相思, 和眼底的寒霜 |
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拈花微笑
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| Posted: 2008-09-08 11:37:30 Post subject: |
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相思贵姓痴?
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悠子
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Joined: 04 Jan 2008
Posts: 1383
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| Posted: 2008-09-08 14:26:14 Post subject: |
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| 道道抛砖引出的美玉 |
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詩盜喜裸評
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Joined: 15 May 2007
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| Posted: 2008-09-08 14:49:24 Post subject: |
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抛砖引玉有功，犒赏自己牛肉面一碗！
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是有缘
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Joined: 08 Feb 2008
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| Posted: 2008-09-08 20:51:02 Post subject: |
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最是那热汤里的温暖
招来了月光的清寒
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悠子
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| Posted: 2008-09-09 05:21:11 Post subject: 奖励得当 |
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| 抛砖引玉有功，犒赏自己牛肉面一碗！ |
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苏茉儿
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| Posted: 2008-09-15 08:30:46 Post subject: |
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爱姐姐，，贴完就跑啦？别跟我学习嘛。：）我们的那？回来看一眼嘛。。。
中秋过的怎样？到处都找不到你。。。
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