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死亡的借口

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Posted: 2008-03-20 05:31:35 Post subject: 死亡的借口

死亡的借口我要干脆的死亡仪式没有钝疼没有长长的祷念 ¬ 怀抱破旧的诗集　吟唱前行安静的水　安静的眼波　以及安静的烦操　心脏跳动无序我以隐秘的　颓废的形式存在我情愿身体的一部分切割成块悬挂　晾干　以便储存在密封透明玻璃罐　　我知道我的一些血管干枯正盘旋在薄薄的罐壁上春天的气味我认定是腐烂发酵的气味经冬搁置的木头　在春风的抚摸下柔软温顺　如你怀中的姑娘紫色的衣裙遮蔽了要表达的欲望检视这样的自己决定微笑着找一个借口　　完美的靠在一朵百合上　结束意识　情感　仅存的文字阳光下　　衰退鲜艳　终止呼吸 _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2008-03-20 18:53:58 Post subject:

我要干脆的死亡仪式没有钝疼没有长长的祷念死亡是不要借口的。错。人家说你“畏罪自杀”，怎么办？哈哈，不要介意。我觉得这个话题太沉重。第三节，那个“玻璃罐”的意象，很有创意。总之这首诗好。 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2008-03-20 19:38:31 Post subject:

看起来很沉重~祝心情愉快~

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Posted: 2008-03-21 04:13:04 Post subject:

阿裙好最近远游否祝福！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2008-03-21 04:28:50 Post subject:

小姑娘写着写着就向现代派靠拢了，慢慢要接近《恶之花》了啥？ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2008-03-21 04:42:26 Post subject:

提上欣赏。 _________________ 点击进入回到拉萨的火车

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Posted: 2008-03-21 06:12:06 Post subject:

的确很沉重。愿开心！

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Posted: 2008-03-22 10:01:49 Post subject:

我怎么没觉得沉重呢？ _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-03-22 10:49:27 Post subject:

好诗。感觉非常失落。 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

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Posted: 2008-03-22 14:27:19 Post subject:

小米妹妹的诗充满了无奈的感伤，但读来却有冷峻在里面！！！祝福你，玉荣！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2008-03-29 05:27:21 Post subject:

伤城 wrote:

我要干脆的死亡仪式
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其实人一直处于说服自己的过程中，就是死亡也好，总会给自己一个理由来让自己确信这样做再合适不过。

问好伤城！谢点评！
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Posted: 2008-03-29 05:28:32 Post subject:

问好楼上所有的朋友，谢！ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2008-03-29 06:00:55 Post subject:

学习了有回味问好 _________________ 莞君

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Posted: 2008-09-07 05:46:33 Post subject:

让我们重读她的诗歌重新认识她 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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