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倾诉
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PostPosted: 2008-08-30 22:55:16    Post subject: 倾诉 Reply with quote

倾诉 〈一〉
阳光在半山腰时,我
象被掠走的柴火妞,让灵魂
飘进城市。我依偎在高楼窗口时
阳光刺痛我的眼睛,拼命追忆
断章的据点

倾诉〈二〉
菜场终于午休,老人也停止
抱怨,手头的零花钱
比窗台上的盆景还要省心,就惦记
接孙子的一路语言

倾诉〈三〉
我翻开一本旧书,里面夹着
许多孩提时的糖纸,有我吃的
有伙伴吃过的,五彩缤纷
儿子吸着无糖牛奶,羡慕着
我的自豪

倾诉〈四〉
不知风有多少积蓄,我终究成为
浪子,收购别人积攒的问题
在黑夜里挥霍,祈求月光的怜悯
聆听衷肠 。有时
我成了反复摇摆的叶子,等待季节
披上秋衣
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风走过,灯灭了,黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。
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nobody
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PostPosted: 2008-08-31 09:33:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢这些短的。问好。
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-08-31 17:22:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

让灵魂
飘进城市。我依偎在高楼窗口时
阳光刺痛我的眼睛,拼命追忆
断章的据点
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zhangmin
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PostPosted: 2008-08-31 18:47:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢nobody
谢谢赵福治
远握.
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zhangmin
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PostPosted: 2008-08-31 18:48:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢nobody
谢谢赵福治
远握.
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PostPosted: 2008-08-31 18:48:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢nobody
谢谢赵福治
远握.
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PostPosted: 2008-09-04 03:00:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

有时
我成了反复摇摆的叶子,等待季节
披上秋衣
我为这句喝彩
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PostPosted: 2008-09-04 20:03:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢你的点评,远握朋友.
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