钓月 秀才
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-08-21 22:06:24 Post subject: |
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欢愉洒脱。 |
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戴玨 秀才

Joined: 03 Jan 2007 Posts: 808
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Posted: 2008-08-22 04:05:30 Post subject: |
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平仄不對,貼詞譜給你做參考:
江南蝶句
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斜日一双双韵
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身似何郎曾傅粉句
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心如韩寿爱偷香韵
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天赋与轻狂韵
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微雨过句
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薄翅腻烟光韵
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才伴游蜂来小苑句
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又随飞絮过东墙韵
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长是为花忙韵
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钓月 秀才
Joined: 12 Apr 2008 Posts: 409 Location: 中国江苏 钓月Collection |
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钓月 秀才
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野航 秀才
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 547 Location: toronto 野航Collection |
Posted: 2008-08-25 15:00:05 Post subject: |
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心肠热,
宾主共飞盅。
玄语悠悠藏世理,
清言落落隐机锋, _________________ 回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统 |
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钓月 秀才
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戴玨 秀才

Joined: 03 Jan 2007 Posts: 808
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Posted: 2008-08-27 01:10:17 Post subject: |
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我用的是龙榆生的《唐宋词格律》。与你的稍有不同。
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"逸趣随飞鸿。 "三平調,不知龍榆生“憶江南”譜子裏那句有? _________________ I labour by singing light
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钓月 秀才
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