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朦胧的醉眼

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-09-03 11:31:19 Post subject:

我在Pier 39 的小酒馆很久没有如此逍遥坐落在海边，宁静的意大利小酒馆在摇曳飘忽的灯光下在海风的交谈声中朦胧与渔火对望深吸几口寂寞海风一阵阵吹来像情人温柔的眼睛今夜只能在岸边想你 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-09-03 12:52:30 Post subject: 怎么听起来他像在水里

你只能在岸边，不下去？ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-09-03 13:06:20 Post subject: 改一下，这样就通了。

紅袖添亂 wrote:

你只能在岸邊，不下去？

我在Pier 93 的小酒館
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可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-09-03 16:43:06 Post subject:

诗文俱佳。待有空，我写Navy pier. _________________ 瞠目结舌

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Posted: 2008-09-04 07:52:41 Post subject: 小心别泄漏军事机密！

拈花微笑 wrote:

詩文俱佳。待有空，我寫Navy pier. Smile

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可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-09-04 07:58:06 Post subject:

有蟹有酒有爱人的醉眼，嗯，醒不来

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Posted: 2008-09-04 08:58:50 Post subject: 就是，商机无限，军事要地，写完再说。

哈哈~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-09-08 21:03:03 Post subject:

你带走了一切为什么偏留下这一片月？那么遥远的星空怎么对得起你的等? _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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