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逃离部落的母狮

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-09-05 05:24:27 Post subject: 逃离部落的母狮

逃离部落的母狮她无休止的逃跑，逃离部落为了先王遗留的骨血她不惜与整个狮群反目成为整个属类的叛逆者她勇敢地要独自撑起整个家的天空独自在非洲的星空下挤一滴奶，给自己的孩子，给王的遗孤现在她最大的敌人就是这位若即若离的新王这个杀死她前夫的男人她要杀掉他，或被他轻而易举的杀掉当她终于狩猎成功，当她在无数失败之后终于有了一只新鲜的小角马时她同时也看到她幼儿们凌乱的尸体母狮啊她咬着自己的乳头彻夜长哭她驯顺的尾着一个男人回家一个杀害儿子的暴徒、杀害丈夫的凶手她沿着自然法则回到狮的部落去回到敌人的家她做了新王的新娘 2008-9-5 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2008-09-05 06:12:35 Post subject:

完整的叙述，哀伤是结局～～～ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

白水
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Posted: 2008-09-05 18:12:46 Post subject:

冲浪, 从文字上读, 有点象<夜宴>的姊妹篇. 而内涵却让人感到沉重.

杨海军
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Posted: 2008-09-06 02:08:54 Post subject:

古老的神秘的荡气迴肠的故事。。。。。。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

钓月
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Posted: 2008-09-06 04:04:30 Post subject:

胜者为王按游戏规则，她理应成为胜利者的战利品 _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

William Zhou周道模
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Joined: 10 Jun 2007
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Posted: 2008-09-06 14:30:27 Post subject:

从动物角度是一种解读，科学完整，合符逻辑。诗人写任何题材都是写人、社会、人类，从这里去读、去想吧…… _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-09-07 02:06:08 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

冲浪, 从文字上读, 有点象<夜宴>的姊妹篇. 而内涵却让人感到沉重.

查查夜宴，没有能下载，感觉是个挺好的电影。写这首诗是受动物世界的影响，当时那匹逃跑的母狮让我很震撼，后来看了叔本华的哲学书，有了更深的理解，所以写成这样。
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杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-09-07 02:08:44 Post subject:

问好阿依琼裙、海军、钓月，道模诸位朋友。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-09-07 15:49:17 Post subject:

故事很震撼，大自然的法则也可类比到人类生存的哲学~

秀水
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Posted: 2008-09-08 07:15:49 Post subject:

悲剧性的结尾。颀赏 _________________ 秀水：省青协会员.在《星星诗刊》《绿风》《诗选刊》《常青藤诗刊》等发表诗歌散文二百余篇。兼写童话。邮箱xshx100@163.com 秀水博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/feizoudeshui

山城子
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Posted: 2008-09-08 18:57:03 Post subject:

她驯顺的尾着一个男人回家一个杀害儿子的暴徒、杀害丈夫的凶手她沿着自然法则回到狮的部落去回到敌人的家她做了新王的新娘 ——深邃的内涵！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

赵福治
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Posted: 2008-09-08 22:03:20 Post subject:

一种叙述,一种表达.

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-09-08 23:23:25 Post subject:

谢谢诸位朋友。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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