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细节1234
Holybolt
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Joined: 27 Feb 2008
Posts: 110
Location: China
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PostPosted: 2008-08-28 10:31:21    Post subject: 细节1234 Reply with quote

细节(一)
疼痛从另一个角度抵达我
渐冷的夜拉近秋天的晚
这一刻才知道遥远如此之近
就像刚刚落下的雨滴
踩疼了我刚刚留下的脚印
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细节(二)
一个眼神从对面袭来
掀起一连串的猜测和遐想
表情从谈论中跌落下来
凝固成分享者和聆听者之间的墙
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细节(三)
座椅在起身时后退了十公分
摩擦声被左右的两人听到
如果愤然离去
那摩擦声会停留在身后的场景里
被更多的人听到
20080822

细节(四)
这样的细节在雨水的冲刷下显露出来
伞下,两个人用一半身体叠加的背影
就像被寒风撼动的树荫
可温暖还是进入到身体的某个部位
进入到彼此在行走中的碰撞里

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重庆子衣
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Joined: 24 May 2008
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PostPosted: 2008-08-29 03:50:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢这些小诗,自然渗透着生活的细胞~
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半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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PostPosted: 2008-08-30 19:23:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

细腻的感觉,句子很好,学习~
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