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色道道

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-08-27 10:58:58 Post subject: 色道道

色道道色彩堆叠我从影子的灰暗处走来强光让线条有如刀锋影子，在平面上或错置在几何区块上色彩劈裂先来后到迳成唯一要件光，是不二的王影，形成各自独立的面向眼见最真实的虚假于前置身于光影之下终会获得一丝阴凉道将现，色将隐道即现，色即显 080827那天0300 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-08-27 14:14:39 Post subject:

哈，道道悄悄地想哪个美女了

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Posted: 2008-08-27 14:54:28 Post subject:

生涩～声色升瑟 _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-08-27 19:02:17 Post subject: 美美每每每一個！

悠子 wrote:

哈，道道悄悄地想哪个美女了

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Posted: 2008-08-27 19:04:30 Post subject: 错字连连！是：生色OR升色。

點點兒 wrote:

生澀～
聲色
升瑟

Razz

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Posted: 2008-08-28 07:44:39 Post subject:

你玩什么电动玩具哪？打得飞沙走石的样子。 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-08-28 07:59:34 Post subject:

这是什么呀？不懂。。。谁是影子？谁是光阿？不玩是不玩，一玩就玩晕个人。。晕。。。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-08-28 11:20:42 Post subject: 其实我看了就想笑，哈哈，让你这么说就合适了

红袖添乱 wrote:

你玩什么电动玩具哪？打得风沙走石的样子。

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Posted: 2008-08-28 11:22:23 Post subject: 道道是影，色是光 (道道别说我们装傻啊)

苏茉儿 wrote:

这是什么呀？不懂。。。谁是影子？谁是光阿？不玩是不玩，一玩就玩晕个人。。晕。。。

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Posted: 2008-08-29 02:11:17 Post subject:

谢谢你们把这些文字都放脑海里跑过一回。色彩指的是人类的作为，光，代表大自然的运行。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-08-30 14:00:07 Post subject: 如果我们都不懂，是不是定义它是一个小小的~~~~

失败？ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-08-30 22:04:54 Post subject:

真像是看电动玩具

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Posted: 2008-08-31 02:53:11 Post subject: 的確失敗，這一點絕對承認。

紅袖添亂 wrote:

失敗？

以道为本的作品，邪道比正道容易发挥。如果一味的抢白，显的说教。原寓：光将现，色将隐；光即现，色即显。而题目订为：色道。似乎好些。
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Posted: 2008-08-31 02:56:06 Post subject: 别迷上这玩意，浪费很多生命。

曲元奇 wrote:

真像是看電動玩具

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