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别找我
东北花大姐儿
童生


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PostPosted: 2008-08-25 02:38:07    Post subject: 别找我 Reply with quote
别找我

爱人
我是你的亡妻
少年的亡妻

我在和你捉迷藏
让你去找

在玉米叶下找
在豆棵里找
在新年的钟声里找

不要去场院的谷垛
不要去山后的泉眼
不要去教堂

爱人啊
我已经藏起来
你找吧
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2008-08-26 03:18:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
去掉这一句，剩余的很完整，很精彩。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2008-08-26 10:47:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
好吧, 我来找找看 Wink
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东北花大姐儿
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PostPosted: 2008-08-31 03:49:11    Post subject: xie Reply with quote
谢白水 冲浪先生

诗歌之难 在于新意 太难了
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-08-31 20:43:24    Post subject: Reply with quote
爱人啊
我已经藏起来
你找吧

看似简单的，却暗藏神情～
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