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她就在那儿

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Posted: 2008-08-24 16:07:23 Post subject: 她就在那儿

她就在那儿她就在那儿叫我怎么对你说我怎么能说得明白对这个世界去说她说个不停我们还要怎样的妥协才够得上一份爱情才能回心转意她就在那儿我背身离去亦不会歌颂 2000-8-24 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2008-08-24 18:16:56 Post subject:

暗藏玄机。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-08-26 07:48:33 Post subject:

喜欢这个，如此简单又如此包容了一切～顶个～今天因此而爽 _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-08-26 22:45:00 Post subject:

【她就在那儿我背离身去亦不会歌颂】不歌颂比歌颂还沉重

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Posted: 2008-08-27 04:26:26 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

暗藏玄机。

玄之又玄，众妙之门。 Shocked

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Posted: 2008-08-27 04:28:28 Post subject:

点点儿 wrote:

喜欢这个，如此简单又如此包容了一切～

顶个～

今天因此而爽 Razz

谢谢。这是最近我写的最好的一首。因为简单。结构很晦涩，谢谢
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Posted: 2008-08-27 04:29:09 Post subject:

曲元奇 wrote:

【她就在那儿我背离身去亦不会歌颂】不歌颂比歌颂还沉重

问好奇兄。
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Posted: 2008-08-27 06:51:21 Post subject:

欣赏，并问好！ _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-08-27 07:01:50 Post subject:

有点玄。得多讨论讨论，好像你们都很懂的样子。。。 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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