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短的，三个

晴宝儿
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Posted: 2008-08-23 00:13:04 Post subject: 短的，三个

《别一朵雪花在胸前》文／晴宝儿我望苏堤苏堤望我苏堤终是汲了千年的灵气浅蓝净天的云温软似狼湖的毫尖取架上笔墨砚纸春桃如盘大一朵满心笺花如雪乱杭州的画须得微风月月静才宜踱步近天堂别雪拾桃轻撩水再提人间俗俗不了情《一朵花的必经之路》用太阳下火红的河流浆洗碧绿的青苔就象屡次经过树阴的风反复锤打扁扁的青春年少的海把痛楚扔给了花朵热恋一双翅膀飞过盛开宝石的路轨那一眼隐匿所有光芒的一眼在一朵花的必经之路日夜醒着《流水与岸》黑夜为一首诗断行深暗的雨象调皮的逗点湮没时空的留白无辜的笔尖划岁月的波浪妈妈做的鱼　在浪花上翻翘我的小围裙兜不起一滴水和水底的鱼桃花在马蹄掀起的尘土里画一枝驿外的红水畔的桃　春吐蕾　夏织丝没还到秋已挂在树梢朦胧成河水的模样有水的季节未必结冰有河流的地方却一定有岸

女中豪杰-四妹
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Posted: 2008-08-23 02:49:34 Post subject:

有水的季节未必结冰有河流的地方却一定有岸欣赏问好 _________________ 脱离躯体的灵魂游走于跳动的指尖…………

晴宝儿
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Posted: 2008-08-28 21:38:00 Post subject:

问好楼上　欢迎！ _________________ 晴宝儿

重庆子衣
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Posted: 2008-08-29 03:51:22 Post subject:

成熟有痛感~

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-08-30 19:31:02 Post subject:

桃花在马蹄掀起的尘土里画一枝驿外的红 ------喜欢这样的描述!

白水
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Posted: 2008-08-31 14:26:51 Post subject:

有水的季节未必结冰有河流的地方却一定有岸哲理, 通俗

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Posted: 2008-08-31 16:20:32 Post subject:

有水的季节未必结冰有河流的地方却一定有岸哲理 _________________ 诗歌、诗剧。以文会友。http://blog.sina.com.cn/juneraiyue112

乱弹者是我
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Posted: 2008-10-05 03:02:30 Post subject:

读过晴宝儿的不少诗，觉得挺有灵气的。这一组诗很不错的一组。而“用太阳下火红的河流 / 浆洗碧绿的青苔 /就象屡次经过树阴的风 /反复锤打扁扁的青春 ”这样的体验很是了不得的哟，很是欣赏，祝好。

晴宝儿
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Posted: 2008-10-23 11:19:32 Post subject:

问好诗友！感谢详阅感受：）遥祝，安好！ _________________ 晴宝儿

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