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那个搓澡女人和我
女中豪杰-四妹
童生


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PostPosted: 2008-08-20 03:27:38    Post subject: 那个搓澡女人和我 Reply with quote

那个搓澡女人和我
文/四妹

那个搓澡女人
身体 瘦瘦的
干瘪的皮下
骨头突兀
似寒冬路旁的枯枝摇曳颤抖


赘肉 圈圈的
透亮的脂肪下
没有支撑
似秋后稻场的谷穗仰面平铺

那个搓澡女人
瞧着丰盈的我
笑着擦肩摸背
哼着旋律
快乐的汗水
滴答 滴答
溅在我粉白麻木的肉身


听着那个搓澡女人
眯缝着眼睛
渐渐的 渐渐的
不敢张开
因为
羞愧在心里缓缓的滋生

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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-08-20 06:03:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

羞愧在心里缓缓的滋生
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女中豪杰-四妹
童生


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PostPosted: 2008-08-20 19:36:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢 赵老师 问好
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脱离躯体的灵魂游走于跳动的指尖…………
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PostPosted: 2008-08-20 22:28:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

哀民生之多艰
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PostPosted: 2008-08-23 00:08:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

对比鲜明 形象深入!
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PostPosted: 2008-08-23 02:46:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
哀民生之多艰



感谢韩老师 问侯您
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PostPosted: 2008-08-23 02:47:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

晴宝儿 wrote:
对比鲜明 形象深入!



谢谢情宝儿 问候 握手
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