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【鹧鸪天】枉凝眉(和是有缘、雨清、墨瑞、安静)
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PostPosted: 2008-08-19 08:27:40    Post subject: 【鹧鸪天】枉凝眉(和是有缘、雨清、墨瑞、安静) Reply with quote

【鹧鸪天】枉凝眉 by 茉儿


小雨初收菡萏池,玲珑数瓣动愁思。
念来旧日同根好,无语今时并蒂歧。

空对镜,枉凝眉,嗟伤独叹婉然姿。
拾得几点清香墨,画色一帘把梦痴。


【鹧鸪天】晨雨惊梦 by 安静


昨夜眠迟梦正痴,雁鸿啼枕动乡思。
迷离旧事惊风雨,寥落残花恼素枝。

折柳曲,寄梅词。几番回顾自心知。
趁闲时煮一樽酒,水远山高不共持。


【鹧鸪天】桃花源 by 是有缘


两岸桃花醉梦痴,春江水鸟唤谁思?
轻风难断阳关曲,夜雨犹存宿柳枝。

留淡墨,散烟霞。良机已失恨无知。
归来只道花开早,重去迷途记不持。


【鹧鸪天】夜湖山側畔观星 by 墨瑞


湖自深情山自痴,星星点点诉相思。
金风昨夜频催渡,玉露今宵怜满枝。

收锦泪,遣清词,聚常缥缈意常知。
红尘共此多遗憾,只待光阴作主持。


【鹧鸪天】七夕漫寄雨清 by 雨清


怨不行文如我痴,也曾逐字计相思。
半笺留白空怀想,一载无人花满枝。

新处境,旧诗词,身同寂寞两心知。
今宵再卜将来意,总是情深累把持。
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PostPosted: 2008-08-19 08:28:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

也不知都贴过来,会不会被其它几个人打,先展了吧。
至于,那图,诗盗,袖姐,你两给办了巴,哈哈,,,还是不会贴。
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PostPosted: 2008-08-19 15:05:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

都好看。茉儿功夫越来越深了
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PostPosted: 2008-08-19 19:07:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

哇!真好。2、3、4名出爐,金牌從缺。
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PostPosted: 2008-08-20 07:22:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
哇!真好。2、3、4名出爐,金牌從缺。



哈哈~~~毛病
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PostPosted: 2008-08-20 09:09:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

悠子 wrote:
都好看。茉儿功夫越来越深了

哪呀,屁股后头瞎学着,学的还是不成样子。:)
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PostPosted: 2008-08-20 09:09:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

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哇!真好。2、3、4名出爐,金牌從缺。


噢,明白了,你的意思是说,金牌你在你那,OK,等你的金镶玉阿。。。出贴,出贴阿。。。。
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PostPosted: 2008-08-20 09:09:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

红袖添乱 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
哇!真好。2、3、4名出爐,金牌從缺。



哈哈~~~毛病


嗯,骂的好,一定是写不出东西,塞得了。。。给他手术吧。哈哈。。。
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PostPosted: 2008-08-21 02:18:57    Post subject: 奥委会借走了!最近金牌缺的凶。 Reply with quote

蘇茉兒 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
哇!真好。2、3、4名出爐,金牌從缺。


噢,明白了,你的意思是說,金牌你在你那,OK,等你的金鑲玉阿。。。出貼,出貼阿。。。。

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PostPosted: 2008-08-21 02:21:54    Post subject: 这倒是,想写花,脑子出现星星。写星星吧!又白光一片。 Reply with quote

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詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
哇!真好。2、3、4名出爐,金牌從缺。



哈哈~~~毛病


嗯,罵的好,一定是寫不出東西,塞得了。。。給他手術吧。哈哈。。。

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PostPosted: 2008-08-21 18:18:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

如此才华 直面人生 前途无限 旧体的才华横溢 写新诗更好
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PostPosted: 2008-08-23 06:36:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
蘇茉兒 wrote:
紅袖添亂 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
哇!真好。2、3、4名出爐,金牌從缺。



哈哈~~~毛病


嗯,罵的好,一定是寫不出東西,塞得了。。。給他手術吧。哈哈。。。


坚定结果,太忙,需用好好休息。。。
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PostPosted: 2008-08-23 06:37:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

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如此才华 直面人生 前途无限 旧体的才华横溢 写新诗更好


谢谢曲兄夸奖。。。借您吉言。。。
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