將進酒 (一诗複写）

[博弈]

將進酒

1.

我對著牆壁
將影子倒進酒杯
直到她滿溢

2.

as I was saying,
spitting out to the glass wall--
saga ways I sin.



ps. line 1 and line 3 share the same char. set.
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（在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

[William Zhou周道模]

英语和汉语是两首不同的诗啊？
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模

[博弈]

[Lake]

Wow, two haikus.

[kino]

saga是英语还是日语？confused

[博弈]

谢谢 蕾珂 与 奇诺，
saga, though sounds like a jap., is an eng. word, or of iceland.
you should be able to find it in a dictionary, saga is not a rarely used word these days, for example in an internet game, or an adventure telling movie, and etc..

here, more like a prose narrative; 我用为“无韵味的唠叨"
Lake's first sight reminds me of the 'phrase' (I made it up)

pour the saga of one's life into surrounding ears

as if a body is a bottle, an ear is a glass,
saga? well, what's in a bottle.
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（在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

[Lake]

Cool, got a cartoon name here.

Lake's first sight reminds me of the 'phrase' (I made it up)

Somewhat. But then I did look it up.
Well, this saga sounds pretty long then

PS: In everyday English, a lot of native English speakers pronounce -ing as -in, so I can also take this line,

saga ways I sin

as 'saga ways I sing'
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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

[Lake]

I'm reading Basho's Saga Diary now. So, 'saga' can be the name of a place or a literary term.
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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins