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路过秋天
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PostPosted: 2008-08-11 23:10:55    Post subject: 路过秋天 Reply with quote

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炎夏要拐弯
我不肯
在立秋的路口直走
再翻一个山坡
秋水在等着

秋水是伊人
微微一些傲气
将一山的金黄映在心里
只能看看

佯装离去
我猛然转身
捉住了
成熟的滋味
蜜一般


2

其实,月不是稀罕物
经常看到它的身影
躲在小河边
屋角也有
模糊的影像

这次,竟被它俘虏
囚在秋夜的枝头
一些撩人的片段
时冷时热
不过,此刻它是圆的


3

遭遇多少次风
我无动于衷
只是将手抱紧
抵御微寒的际遇

直到有一片叶
无法承受大地的呼唤
我知道秋在挥手
冬要来了

要来了,就像春天
迟早的事
沉醉无法打破
那么秋就是脆弱的季节
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PostPosted: 2008-08-11 23:29:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

很不错 有意境的
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PostPosted: 2008-08-12 01:15:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢少君赏读!年纪不小却是新兵一个,还请多赐教。
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PostPosted: 2008-08-12 08:28:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

佯装离去
我猛然转身
捉住了
成熟的滋味
蜜一般



值得回味~~
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PostPosted: 2008-08-13 01:05:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好阿伊!
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