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刘华明
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Joined: 13 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2008-09-04 17:54:05 Post subject: 誓言

当我老了牙齿松动那些坚硬的誓言会掉在地上亲爱的请你一定小心翼翼的将它收好连同时间的灰一同埋进记忆的城郭那里曾有两只鸳鸯自由自在的生活有一个人的相思和痛有风吹不散的月光涂满墙角的青苔亲爱的当我像夕阳一样的枯萎、跌落请放慢日子的脚步在春天的路口等我等一个熟悉的声音喊出你的名字等一朵玫瑰露出前世的笑脸等海水在你的眼里枯竭石头腐烂等尘世中过往的身影呈现我昔日的容颜

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Posted: 2008-09-04 17:59:06 Post subject:

挺感人的诗歌. 请细查一下, 打字或有误?问好.

刘华明
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Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Posts: 75

刘华明Collection

Posted: 2008-09-04 18:12:01 Post subject:

没发现啊！请老师指正。多谢！

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