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荷香

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Posted: 2008-07-25 07:16:34 Post subject: 荷香

看不见最初的萌动于静水软泥的深处一池幽碧，满目芳华淡抹夏的炙灼荷的愫情玉立湖边，涟漪或深或浅的心境撑一叶兰舟轻歌采桑，曼舞凌波邂逅你淡然的笑在水中央荷香在每个没有荷花的季节从我蝉翼般的梦里漫过 07/25/2008

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Posted: 2008-07-25 07:29:18 Post subject:

给袖儿的<莲花落>改了一下: 我是一朵修行千年的莲千年修行纤尘不染的容颜荷塘深处可有人听见我对雨的诉愿春花秋月里可有人记得我藕断丝连我是一朵等待千年的莲千年等待你回顾的漪涟茫茫人海里谁在意我不胜凉风的思念幽幽碧水中谁将和我同诉并蒂的缠绵作业就这样啦~~

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Posted: 2008-07-25 16:53:19 Post subject:

我在荷叶上滚动！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-07-25 16:57:13 Post subject: 表现得很完整！

悠子 wrote:

给袖儿的<莲花落>改了一下:
...

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可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-07-27 06:37:53 Post subject:

偶把荷叶作成香包包儿～ _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-07-27 16:12:29 Post subject: 你还是下来吧

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

我在荷叶上滚动！

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Posted: 2008-07-27 16:13:33 Post subject: 好香。点点好

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偶把荷叶作成香包包儿～ Razz

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Posted: 2008-07-27 17:40:47 Post subject:

涟漪或深或浅的心境妙

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Posted: 2008-07-28 06:07:48 Post subject:

很想吃荷叶米粉蒸肉 _________________ 瞠目结舌

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Posted: 2008-07-28 08:10:32 Post subject: 拱東銀！

拈花微笑 wrote:

很想吃荷叶米粉蒸肉

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Posted: 2008-07-28 08:11:54 Post subject: 下來就找不到我了！

悠子 wrote:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

我在荷叶上滚动！

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Posted: 2008-07-28 08:42:05 Post subject: 把你包到荷叶里

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

悠子 wrote:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

我在荷叶上滚动！

米粉蒸肉~~

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Posted: 2008-07-28 08:57:03 Post subject: 原来你已闻到香味了

拈花微笑 wrote:

很想吃荷叶米粉蒸肉

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Posted: 2008-07-29 21:21:03 Post subject:

梦的池塘迷住了一双眼睛也停住了一个身 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-07-31 06:55:54 Post subject:

悠子 wrote:

给袖儿的<莲花落>改了一下:
...

上好的莲花落~~~
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梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-07-31 06:57:34 Post subject:

轻歌采桑，不该是采桑。是在挑藕？？ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-07-31 07:39:12 Post subject: 采桑，采桑子。。。呓，几天没有见你

红袖添乱 wrote:

轻歌采桑，不该是采桑。是在挑藕？？

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Posted: 2008-08-01 17:14:02 Post subject:

悠子 wrote:

红袖添乱 wrote:

轻歌采桑，不该是采桑。是在挑藕？？

奥，我伏案写别的哪~~~瞎闹~~
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梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-08-02 15:40:08 Post subject: 伏案！睡趴了。。。

紅袖添亂 wrote:

悠子 wrote:

紅袖添亂 wrote:

輕歌採桑，不該是採桑。是在挑藕？？

奧，我伏案寫別的哪~~~瞎鬧~~

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Posted: 2008-08-04 07:52:29 Post subject:

悠子你好。。。。你好像特别喜欢荷！荷一样的女子，，，， _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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