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念奴娇·观沧海

成之
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Joined: 26 Jul 2008
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Posted: 2008-07-27 22:00:37 Post subject: 念奴娇·观沧海

海平线上，远望去，只见水天无际。仿佛乾坤如镜立，欲诉包容涵义。日月其中，星辰其里，吞吐天和地。大千世界，问谁能此豪气？　　昔日孕化鲲鹏，横空垂翼，水击三千里。正是从中凭借力，方得扶摇而起。几度沧桑，半空蜃市，虚幻多神秘。百川归一，胸襟宽广无比！　　注：《庄子·逍遥游》：“鹏之徙于南冥也，水击三千里，抟扶摇而上者九万里。”

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-07-28 05:58:04 Post subject:

"仿佛乾坤如镜立,欲诉包容涵义".妙喻! "百川归一,胸襟宽广无比".博大胸怀! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2008-07-29 11:49:59 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

“仿佛乾坤如镜立，欲诉包容涵义”，妙喻！
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谢版主雅评，问好！

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