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静 谧
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PostPosted: 2008-07-26 00:00:46    Post subject: 静 谧 Reply with quote

静 谧

声响踱出了黑夜
一切都安稳下来

凉意在八月的湖面上
能够漂浮的是内心的叶子
它来自凋零
一个现实里的枯萎

道路倒下了
象我沉睡时的长发还在生长
我默想:它能否去一个
我无法到达的地方

我只想触碰
那感觉装在寂寞里
掩埋了呼吸和黎明

20080716
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PostPosted: 2008-07-26 06:24:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

内敛, 深沉
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PostPosted: 2008-07-26 06:42:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白水 Moonlight
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PostPosted: 2008-07-26 07:03:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

静 谧

声响出了黑夜
一切都安稳下来

凉意在八月的湖面上
能够漂浮的是内心的叶子
它来自凋零
一个现实里的枯萎

道路倒下了
象我沉睡时的长发还在生长
我默想:它能否去一个
我无法到达的地方

我只想触碰
那感觉装在寂寞里
掩埋了呼吸和黎明

20080716

这是一首非常成功的诗歌,夜的"静谧"暗衬着心的不平静。现实的凋零和理想的不泯灭,在诗人的黑夜里是这样真实可触。
好诗,赞一个!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-26 07:04:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢明月
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