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听 雨(外一首)
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PostPosted: 2008-07-24 08:11:35    Post subject: 听 雨(外一首) Reply with quote

听 雨(外一首)

在最热的节气里下雨
不能说那不是个很好的时刻
特别是在夜里,打开窗户
让声音飘进来,落入身体的每个角落
立时火焰被扑灭了,到处是遗留的灰
一阵风吹过,它会和体内的热气
一同被抛到脚下的纸篓里,等待清除
沿着雨水的音符行走,很快就可以到达
黎明和昨夜未能接触的梦境
梦境也是湿漉漉的,除了皮肤的光滑
体会不到植物和周遭的黑
珍珠一滴滴落下,又无数滴被弹起
再后来是在洼地处凝聚成一片白
那白是月光给的,于想象无关
可是这滴落的声音与现实有关
它一直警告我:生命来自弹奏
来自撞击后的破碎。于是
我也设下一场雨,规劝自己
在适宜的时候学会倾听

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PostPosted: 2008-07-24 15:42:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

最后的句子耐人寻味。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-26 00:03:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢冲浪的阅读
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