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楚午
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PostPosted: 2008-07-22 17:50:03    Post subject: 最近写的几个,请批! Reply with quote

◎阳光穿不透忧思(外三个)

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所有的念头消瘦下来
除了我,一切都正茂盛

青翠的树木,在窗外站立
内心的鸟儿没有迎面飞去

阳光穿不透忧思,一枚
盛开的茶叶,静静躺在水底


◎给死亡下个定义

一只肥胖的蜘蛛
端坐在高处
把饥饿挂成一张网
经营着它的辽阔

将时间彻底粘牢
一口就吞掉了一个人的余生


◎错觉

傍晚,工业区
所有的工厂都开了闸
水喧闹着泄了出来
流得满街都是
快餐店、超市显然是低洼处
一些水停了下来

一旦被释放
就恢复了叽叽喳喳
那些未蜕去方言的口音
亲切得就像是家乡的
一群麻雀在麦场上的交谈


◎夏日的清凉

找一处树荫
躺下
天空变得亲近
风儿追赶蝴蝶
狗尾巴草舔着脸
头顶上的蓝色湖泊
有点点银鱼
懒得游动
仿佛置身湖底
一些水渐渐高过我
忘了怎样呼吸

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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2008-07-22 19:12:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

可以用精彩一词了。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-22 20:47:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

都不错,欣赏。
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白水
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Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2008-07-23 18:20:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

的确好诗, 提起来
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