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浅思维的一首：天真

一树摇风
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Joined: 15 Nov 2006
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一树摇风Collection

Posted: 2006-12-04 06:27:35 Post subject: 浅思维的一首：天真

儿子站在门外甜甜地喊着： 爸爸爸爸爸爸 我躺在床上一动不动 一副老子的模样  我笑了：小子 以你的稚嫩又怎能轻易 敲开一扇世故的门 儿子悻悻地离开了  那扇门依旧铁青着脸 我忽然有些难过 又想起了那段孙子般的生活 好在儿子又回来了　嗓音依然甜甜　　　　　　　　　　　２００６.１２.３ _________________ 诗是诗人的绿卡／美是美人的护照

杯中冲浪
进士出身

Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
杯中冲浪Collection

Posted: 2006-12-04 06:42:15 Post subject:

从平常生活中寻找哲理，发现诗情。不足的是，自然不够。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2006-12-05 16:52:28 Post subject:

儿子, 镜子. 思维不浅

和平岛
举人

Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 1277
Location: Victoria, Canada
和平岛Collection

Posted: 2006-12-14 21:22:14 Post subject:

写得很生动了着实不易 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

kokho
进士出身

Joined: 30 Nov 2006
Posts: 2642
Location: Singapore
kokhoCollection

Posted: 2006-12-14 23:16:49 Post subject:

亲子诗歌　温情　：））问好！ _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

杨光
秀才

Joined: 01 Jun 2006
Posts: 683

杨光Collection

Posted: 2006-12-15 00:04:34 Post subject:

诗意的生活感悟又想起了那段孙子般的生活删去如何 _________________ 杨光的语言空间 http://blog.sina.com.cn/languagespace

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