曲元奇
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风雨
不叫夜安宁
落叶
满街
残缺梦
往事寥落
残云
老
月痕如冰
晓风冷 |
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詩盜喜裸評
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| Posted: 2008-07-20 19:54:38 Post subject: |
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有古风味，押个韵。
月痕衔冰曙色寒，纵无风雨睡不安。
门开落木摇风瘦，水墨初收往事残。
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红袖添乱
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| Posted: 2008-07-20 20:53:44 Post subject: |
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不许，不许，怎么就秋啦~~~夏还没热烈完哪~~
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| Posted: 2008-07-28 06:01:52 Post subject: |
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极尽洗炼 
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曲元奇
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| Posted: 2008-07-28 20:16:08 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢 |
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2008-07-29 21:15:31 Post subject: |
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风雨当前
夜
睡得不甜
落叶清闲
梦
依稀未见
往事已残
云
仍然在天
晓月还寒
人
愁容满面
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曲元奇
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| Posted: 2008-07-30 18:15:55 Post subject: |
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| 有缘兄更上一层楼 谢谢 |
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红袖添乱
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| Posted: 2008-07-31 06:47:37 Post subject: |
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~~有缘的很好玩
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苏茉儿
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| Posted: 2008-08-04 07:51:27 Post subject: |
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有古风味，押个韵。
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步一，哈！
离殇 by 茉儿 (步韵)
落瓣辞枝眼底寒，蜿蜒两处意难安。
无关风雨飘摇处，月下离人春色残。
离殇 by 是有缘 (步韵)
苦恋南枝坠地寒，身分两处怎心安？
今年风雨因何瘦，不见离人景色残。
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曲元奇
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| Posted: 2008-08-04 20:47:54 Post subject: |
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| 苏妹 你好 |
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苏茉儿
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| Posted: 2008-08-05 09:56:55 Post subject: |
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曲兄，好久不见，回安！希望你别介意，，俺跟有缘兄步了韵，的确，你得原玉写的不错！
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詩盜喜裸評
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| Posted: 2008-08-06 17:01:27 Post subject: 呀！美死～能得两位唱和。题目取的妙！ |
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| 蘇茉兒 wrote: |
| 詩盜喜裸評 wrote: |
有古風味，押個韻。
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步一，哈！
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