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墨林简约诗《记得，你吃糖... ...》

墨林
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Posted: 2008-07-18 11:59:26 Post subject: 墨林简约诗《记得，你吃糖... ...》

墨林简约诗《记得，你吃糖... ...》《记得，你吃糖... ...》记得，登山时，你吃糖。当你的脚刹不住车的时候我以超人速度冲在你的前面你象木然的小鹿，被我拦截在怀里而我的脚,却离悬崖仅咫尺在你的面前,我就是一座山。记得，你吃糖。在下山的路上当你将糖块塞进我手里的时候我知道此时你的心比糖的熔点还低我知道有一个字以相同的方式被裹着很透明但我不敢打开在你的面前，我是灿烂的阳光。记得，旧地重游，你不吃糖。那声尖叫早已销声匿迹你说：自上次“糖门事件”之后就忌口了透过你的窗口我看见了那张丢弃的糖纸沿着走过的路径随风起舞峭壁处，一只残臂的纸鸢坠落... ... http://blog.sina.com.cn/dmdqw _________________ 诗歌是不朽的人性之美的灵光;诗歌是人类最纯粹的精神家园。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/dmdqw http://blog.bandao.cn/archive/8025/

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Posted: 2008-07-19 01:36:11 Post subject:

当你的脚刹不车的时候 ——当你的脚刹不住车的时候（笔误？）我以超人般速度地冲在你的前面——我以超人般的速度冲在你的前面或我以超人速度般地冲在你的前面（行不行？）不少地方还可打磨。 _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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