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渔歌子—江雪
莹雪
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PostPosted: 2008-07-18 18:59:33    Post subject: 渔歌子—江雪 Reply with quote

观雪韵，闲舟去，休问酷寒身遇。
钓江湖素色诗情，满载美音华句。

渔歌子又一体　单调二十五字，五句三仄韵
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2008-07-18 19:18:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
为观雪韵,不问酷寒.''满载美音华句"

莹雪满载而归啊!
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2008-07-18 22:28:07    Post subject: Reply with quote
黄洋界 wrote:
为观雪韵,不问酷寒.''满载美音华句"

莹雪满载而归啊!

在网上搜图片时偶有所感。谢谢黄老点评！
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PostPosted: 2008-07-19 03:31:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
“钓江湖素色诗情，满载美音华句。”好意境，好诗情！
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2008-07-19 18:41:07    Post subject: Reply with quote
qinghongh wrote:
“钓江湖素色诗情，满载美音华句。”好意境，好诗情！
谢谢qinghongGG点评！问好
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