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Holybolt
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Joined: 27 Feb 2008
Posts: 110
Location: China
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PostPosted: 2008-07-14 16:53:22    Post subject: 慢 Reply with quote

雨季来了
就在胸口处溅起浪花
我需要慢下来
去审视细节

我的欲望停留在冰点
冻结了冉冉升起的火焰
对于梦境,我只能跪下来
去悼念来自更深处的痛

无法满足,我只能豢养贪婪
这使我难以继承槐树的低矮
我只想在躯体的周围盖满浮冰
去抚慰懵懂的魂灵

脱掉鞋袜
我接触到前进的道路
踩踏扭曲了空旷的黎明
我的小布满泪水
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半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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PostPosted: 2008-07-17 07:25:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

无法满足,我只能豢养贪婪
这使我难以继承槐树的低矮

这一首一般了~喜欢这两句! Smile
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