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玻璃心
沙漠
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PostPosted: 2008-07-12 06:27:22    Post subject: 玻璃心 Reply with quote


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把自己镂成一只透明的杯子
在时间和空间里,做一名行者
采撷一滴露一丝风,让一种思想,溶解在
安静的心里


2
一份承诺。两片柠檬
沁入水和阳光,从心底喷发出来的
一些简简单单的语言,是心灵
喜悦的投影


3
不一样的心境,装盛不一样的心情
阳光和月光,那么简单地
倾泻下来。蝉和青蛙,各自在鸣唱
不同的色彩和声音
一样可以美丽


4
我们可以拒绝沉湎,却无法拒绝感受
人生像醇酒。我们需要一块冰的宁静,释放一种淡泊
使得我们的心
晶莹而清透


5
春风吹过,很轻很真实
一抹绿色,淡淡的或远远的,而它就在那里。
一个浅浅的微笑,一个轻轻的眼神
都是心底的深深痕迹
在你的心空,洋溢一种温馨


6
当爱已走远,留下撕裂般的疼痛。你的手
细细触摸一根芒刺。
在破碎的记忆里,品尝思念的苦咖啡
其实也还是有甜的滋味


7
有时候,距离,是一块生长美好的土地
就像磕磕碰碰的玻璃杯
远远的,安静;没有彼此的伤害
简单的,意味着快乐的


8
让往事随风,给心灵卸载。很多时候,坚持不是必须。
放弃,等于放生自己
腾出一方空灵的净地,装载崭新的黎明
太阳、星辰和风
不会重复昨天


9
美丽,其实很简单
对一根蜡烛微笑,并用你美好的心情去点燃
即使四周很黑
你也会拥有一片明媚的心境
让色彩在上面舞蹈
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-07-12 06:33:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

很富哲理的小诗,图片也很美,欣赏,问好沙漠~
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白水
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PostPosted: 2008-07-12 07:07:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

很喜欢这组诗歌.
从朗读的角度看, 个别字调一下似更上口. 或许每个人的声系不同......
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芸绮
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PostPosted: 2008-07-12 17:32:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

很美,问好!
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司马策风
举人


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PostPosted: 2008-07-12 18:33:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

7不错,感觉结尾一句可收得更好.
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