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高阳台·谒嫘祖祠
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PostPosted: 2008-07-07 18:28:46    Post subject: 高阳台·谒嫘祖祠 Reply with quote

夹道连畦,如云似盖,桑林掩映芝房。袅袅香烟,西陵圣母端庄。两厢壁画文明史,别人猿、树叶裙装。举蚕桑,织绢缫丝,渐着霓裳。 吴绫蜀锦秋江色,绣话重叶叠,凤舞鸾翔。驼队西行,绨绸输入邻邦。全球服饰迷人展,斗新奇,个性张扬。殿堂中,绿女红男,一瓣心香。





应“嫘祖颂”征稿,终夜构思,黎明得句成稿,内容粗糙,请网友多多指正Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-07-08 04:24:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

即抚今追昔,又突出圣母历史功绩,个人认为十分得体.
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PostPosted: 2008-07-08 14:41:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

意深。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-11 16:35:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

夹道连畦,如云似盖,桑林掩映芝房。袅袅香烟,西陵圣母端庄。

起得非常好
读到后面渐觉平凡.
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