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化蝶
悠子
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PostPosted: 2008-07-07 05:46:09    Post subject: 化蝶 Reply with quote
在颜色面前
我不敢
相信自己的眼睛
是白色里的一点鹅黄
在墨翠的背景里变成
嫩绿

如果能
在你的眼底
涂抹
一片湛蓝的天
一弯倩碧的水
一波黄澄澄的麦田

我便是
一只
缤纷五彩的
蝶

07/07/2007 Rolling Eyes
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2008-07-07 17:47:09    Post subject: Reply with quote
振翅缤纷天与地，留停彩点在人间。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-07 19:59:30    Post subject: Reply with quote
能，这蝶穿比基尼么？ Laughing
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悠子
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PostPosted: 2008-07-08 05:00:51    Post subject: 蝶为悦己者装~~ Reply with quote
博弈 wrote:
能，这蝶穿比基尼么？ Laughing
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拈花微笑
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PostPosted: 2008-07-08 08:12:43    Post subject: Reply with quote
黄澄澄的麦田里，没有花蜜，蝶儿怕是会饿。。。。。。玩笑，玩笑。

好看！ want to smile
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PostPosted: 2008-07-08 11:57:40    Post subject: 不采花的蝶~ Reply with quote
拈花微笑 wrote:
黄澄澄的麦田里，没有花蜜，蝶儿怕是会饿。。。。。。玩笑，玩笑。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-08 11:59:32    Post subject: 要不改成 Reply with quote
拈花微笑 wrote:
黄澄澄的麦田里，没有花蜜，蝶儿怕是会饿。。。。。。玩笑，玩笑。
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“黄澄澄的油菜花” Rolling Eyes
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PostPosted: 2008-07-10 08:58:10    Post subject: 可以这样改呀! Reply with quote
悠子 wrote:
拈花微笑 wrote:
黄澄澄的麦田里，没有花蜜，蝶儿怕是会饿。。。。。。玩笑，玩笑。
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“黄澄澄的油菜花” Rolling Eyes



土地改革工程浩大，蝶儿改燕儿容易些。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-10 11:32:36    Post subject: 8行，燕儿好像就黑白两色 Reply with quote
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
悠子 wrote:
拈花微笑 wrote:
黄澄澄的麦田里，没有花蜜，蝶儿怕是会饿。。。。。。玩笑，玩笑。
...


“黄澄澄的油菜花” Rolling Eyes



土地改革工程浩大，蝶儿改燕儿容易些。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-12 02:38:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
第一段开启的好
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PostPosted: 2008-07-14 08:22:20    Post subject: 没关系，我借一件花衬衫给牠穿。 Reply with quote
悠子 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
悠子 wrote:
拈花微笑 wrote:
黄澄澄的麦田里，没有花蜜，蝶儿怕是会饿。。。。。。玩笑，玩笑。
...


“黄澄澄的油菜花” Rolling Eyes



土地改革工程浩大，蝶儿改燕儿容易些。

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