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周末回老家方山看女儿

白云
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Joined: 22 Apr 2008
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Location: 中国江苏
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Posted: 2008-07-07 03:20:18 Post subject: 周末回老家方山看女儿

周末回老家方山看女儿(2008-7-5)：　　山重重，水迢迢，那张笑脸宛然现风阵阵，云朵朵，这种亲情一路飘一声呼唤，一愣神，便如飞鸟投怀抱不尽温存，不由说，恍若清泉到眼眸小手黑乎乎，捏个泥人还缺腿脸儿红艳艳，变成花朵最开心我是大姐姐了，不哭不哭！你是好爸爸哎，喜欢喜欢！ _________________ http://jianghai97.blog.163.com/

冰清
同进士出身

Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2008-07-07 09:00:29 Post subject:

儿女情, 就这样有滋有味！再提炼一下, 会更好。

白云
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Joined: 22 Apr 2008
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Posted: 2008-07-07 22:27:32 Post subject:

问好冰清先生，多谢指点！ _________________ http://jianghai97.blog.163.com/

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