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漏雨的思想会有许多破绽
元业
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PostPosted: 2008-07-04 09:29:20    Post subject: 漏雨的思想会有许多破绽 Reply with quote

1,红
抬起你的腰肢,让蜜蜂从蕊的针尖飞过
雨一点一点,借助翅膀的力量,或者是从雨水的肌肤上
携取一些信任,因为夏小小的心动
打开的书籍芬芳丰盛 晚宴贵宾
从下摆拂地的袅娜 看见江山
你手心中《霓裳曲》的音律在颤
沿屋瓦的疼滚落入瓷质盆 响声
惊醒一屋子睡梦
2,拾穗人
天空失去眼睛,太阳的穗头撒落一地
你在收拾谁远旅的行李 沿地垄的虫鸣
看见秋天的乳房 饱满而荒凉

种植影子的人,你的汗水,在切割西瓜的地点
浇灌谁忐忑的思想,从今以后
谁将是一个流浪的人
心装爱情 吟咏一些收获的季节
3,盛夏的舞会
盛夏的舞会,附在阳光的尘上
看炎热一路匆匆而来,它的口袋
盛满季节多少的谎言 热烈而眩晕

花朵的假面具,看见蜜蜂的柔情
心波浪起来 热闹起来
一些进进出出的事物,在悄然变换颜色
4,暮色在一根琴弦上
一根弦上,暮色正襟危坐
落日浑大的躯体跌入黄昏
溅起的浪花,模糊了多少双眼睛

挑拨琴音的人,坐在黄昏的一角
他的身影将要被黄昏吞食
在失去最后光彩的时刻
一个声音从他的喉咙
或者是从琴弦上沉闷地发出
5,窗下的蟋蟀
窗下,我的声音,沿爬上窗棂的青藤
敲击你酣睡的梦窗

一声,比夏天还长的声音
不是为了诉冤
我存在过的思想,将敲击你的耳膜
失去夏季以前,我扮做你的牧童
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2008-07-04 12:09:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

元业兄您好!欢迎来落尘!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-04 14:00:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

分开来读都很好,可是连在一起又有几分混乱,我再读读。问好!
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红袖添乱
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PostPosted: 2008-07-04 14:59:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

如此丰富~~欣赏!
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而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。
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点点儿
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PostPosted: 2008-07-04 15:06:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

俺也来顶个`
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