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[原创]夏荷莲涟
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PostPosted: 2008-07-04 22:45:45    Post subject: [原创]夏荷莲涟 Reply with quote

夏荷莲涟
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那日去医院作透视,碰巧医院刚下班,影液全部倒掉了。作透视的医生正好是我的朋友,他答应立即调对,让我稍候片刻。透视室就在医院的后花园旁边,为了不让朋友难找,我信步朝那儿走去。
后花园的构造没有什么特别,不外乎是些寻常的花花草草,苍松翠木,亭台轩榭,这些皆已司空见惯,无意驻足停步。我径直往深处走去,当穿过一条绿色甬道,拐入一条杂草丛生的小径,立刻我的眼前一亮,被前方的半亩荷塘深深震撼了。
荷叶罗裙一色裁,芙蓉向脸两边开。碧水中肥叶如扇,绿意盎然,左右摇摆,憨态可掬。尽管没有“接天连叶无穷碧,映日荷花别样红”的磅礴大气,但也清婉隽秀,逶迤连绵,蔚为壮观。
一碧盈盈的荷叶擎出水面,撩拨起一湖碧波涟漪。荷叶上的滴滴水珠如一粒粒散落的珍珠,晶莹剔透,玲珑可爱,懒洋洋地躺在荷叶宽大的怀抱里,绽放着灿烂的笑脸。绿伞丛中探出朵朵婷婷玉立的荷花,如无数双纤纤素手,美玉天成。也似一张张俏丽清润的笑脸,让人疑是刚刚出浴的仙女下达凡间。有的开得热情奔放,无拘无束,倾其所有;有的半开半掩,羞涩腼腆;有的垂首兀立,春容含笑;有的三五成群,窃窃私语;有的孑然一身,孤高冷漠;有的立于高处凝神眺望,望穿秋水;有的隐匿于碧波之间,静静做着一场春梦,埋藏一世的荣华;有的冰清玉洁,天然雕饰;有的粉黛繁华,艳若桃红。一朵朵拥在大荷叶丛中,似对荷叶意绵绵,情依依,那万种风韵让人向往沉醉。
一阵风拂过,花枝摇曳,宛如罗裙舒展。玉步轻移,如行云流水。翠袖轻舒,胜似嫩柳临风。自然如泉水流淌,空灵如鸿羽飘旋,恬静淡雅如蝶翼翕动。流粉飞玉,清香四溢。让人不由自主地想起理学大师周周敦颐的佳句:“出淤泥而不染,濯清涟而不妖,中通外直,不蔓不枝,香远益清,亭亭静植,可远观而不可亵玩焉。”
不时有蜻蜓穿梭其间,或立于荷上,或追逐嬉戏,或自由飞翔。水中的鱼儿或群聚或独处,时而浮出水面,时而藏匿于荷叶之间。闭上眼,头脑里情不自禁地浮现出“鱼戏莲叶间,鱼戏莲叶东,鱼戏莲叶西,鱼戏莲叶南,鱼戏莲叶北”美妙景象。
荷出自淤泥而高洁自爱,花濯清涟而无妖冶之姿,不攀不附,不与百花争春,仅以独特的丰姿奉献着青春的风采。相期来年,小荷又露水面时,荷塘又是一夏的灿烂,泥中又多了一季的丰收。那满池荡漾的绿,那绿丛中点点的红,那阵阵和风传送着的馨香,怎不让人流连于荷之情,荷之韵,荷之洁,荷之品!
正当我沉醉得不知归路时,朋友的声音响起,恍惚间才忆起来此地的目的,只得依依不舍地起身道别。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-05 00:55:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

作为个人抒情来讲,比较舒畅。

作为艺术作品来讲,缺乏新意。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-05 22:37:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

观察细致,描写细腻!
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