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一棵树死了
海静
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PostPosted: 2008-07-02 19:36:40    Post subject: 一棵树死了 Reply with quote

一棵树死了

海静

你是一只从远方飞来的鸟儿
一棵树 用最坚实的杈
托起你温暖的巢
一棵树 听任你
在浓密的翠叶间欢歌跳跃

你的梦想在蓝天
倦了的时候
回来歇歇脚

沉沉的黑夜
微风拂过
一棵树在呜咽
“我的鸟儿,你在哪里?
你可觅到了栖息的枝桠?”
星光披洒 笼着
叶尖欲滴的清露
那是树心底的泪啊
从根部爬到枝头
树知道:这儿不是你唯一的家!
树叶摇响
撕心裂肺

张望天际 苍茫——
流浪的鸟儿在远方
一棵树 站在那里
形同虚设


2008.06.27

牟海静,女,1973年出生,教师,近50篇论文、散文、诗歌获奖或发表,散见于《语言文字报》《山东教育》《语文报》《山东教育导报》《中学生读写》《作文导报》《渤海》《渤海晨刊》《滨州教育》及当地报刊,有作品入选《跨世纪教育研究. 继续教育的理论与实践探索》《中国金奖论文》《五月的祈祷》等多种书本及各种网络选本。

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秀水
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Joined: 31 May 2008
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PostPosted: 2008-07-03 03:17:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

张望天际 苍茫——
流浪的鸟儿在远方
一棵树 站在那里
形同虚设

颀赏这个结尾
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PostPosted: 2008-07-03 05:53:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

嗯,不错的结尾~~~
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踏过废墟,走来
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PostPosted: 2008-07-03 12:53:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

直白一些,稍虚一些为好!!!问候诗人!!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-03 17:59:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

海靜诗歌至真至爱,引人注目
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